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Monday, 17 May 2021

Going to the Fortuna in sky city¬

 on Saturday, me and my family were getting to ready go to the Sky City Fortuna. We were excited to eat together as a family at the Fortuna, even my nana's sister was coming with us. She is super nice to us. My nana's culture is Cook Island. it was 5 o'clock now. So we hopped into the car, put our seat belt on and went to go get my nana's sister. When we arrived at her house, we waited in the car and she came out of the house. She said her goodbye's to The other member of the family in the house and closed the door, ready to go with us to the fortuna. My brother Prodeus was coming with us to but was at my uncles house for the weekends. He still wanted to come so she we went to go pick him after we picked my nana's sister up from her house. We finally arrived at my uncles house, Prodeus was excited to go to the fortuna. Not gonna lie, The sky City fortuna is actually a good place to eat at Tbh... Awhile later, we have finally arrived at the Sky City fortuna, we were all super excited to eat and enjoy ourselves there. We had a great at the Fortuna, hope we go again. soon! <3


We had an amazing/awesome time there <3


Fortuna, Federal Street, Auckland | Zomato

Thursday, 13 May 2021

Naomi STuia Punctuation

 

Naomi Punctuation worksheet

 What is a full stop and when does it get used?

At the end of a sentence. Also between letters. For example, V.i.p.  



Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a full stop.

  • (Sentence 1) I need to go to the toilet.

  • (Sentence 2) I went to the shops to buy candy. 

  • (Sentence 3) I went into the kitchen to get a snack.


What is a question mark and when does it get used?

You use it when you are asking a question, for example. When is your birthday?  



Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a question mark.

  • (Sentence 1) When is your birthday?

  • (Sentence 2) Where are you going?

  • (Sentence 3) Do you want to come to the shops with me?


What is a speech mark and when does it get used?

You use speech marks prop- for taking, for example. “Come here,” said Miss Tuia. 



Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a speech mark.

  • (Sentence 1) “Come here” said Miss Tuia.

  • (Sentence 2) “stop talking loud” said Miss Tuia.

  • (Sentence 3) “Do you want to stay in at lunch and miss Training” said Miss Tuia.


What is a comma and when does it get used?

You use a comma to either take a breath, for example. 



Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a comma.

  • (Sentence 1) I need to go to the toilet real quick, can you look after my stuff while i'm gone.

  • (Sentence 2) I am super hungry, I am going to get a snack from the fridge.

  • (Sentence 3) I am super tired, I am going to have a rest.



What is an exclamation point and when does it get used?

You can use exclamation points when you either shout out, or maybe be excited!



Write 3 sentences showing me the correct use of a exclamation point.

  • (Sentence 1) I am super excited to go to rainbow ends!

  • (Sentence 2) I am super excited to see my cousins! 

  • (Sentence 3) I am super excited to see my nana! 


Sunday, 25 April 2021

going to the movies to watch Godzilla vs King Kong!

 Today is Anzac day!! so my mum thought about taking me and my sister to the movies to watch Godzilla vs King Kong. My brother isn't coming because he already saw it and is at my uncles house. I am super excited because this is going to be the first time i have seen this movie, even when its Anzac day <3. Pray to the men who fought for our country!! (World war 2) I hope the movie will be good! i even heard that Godzilla and King Kong is going to vs this stronger monster. Its name is Mecha Godzilla. He is a different verison of Godzilla. Mecha Godzilla is a robot, and more powerful. I can't wait! because i have been waiting for this day to come. 


Thursday, 15 April 2021

School Holidays

Today is the last day of school and i am super excited because I just want to chill at home all day long and relax. But not only that, i can even go up north to my grandad for a couple of days!! I would so love that because me and my family can hang out with him for a bit and go to the beach if its a sunny day. We can even go out to get hot chips and do more things!! The one thing I like about the holiday's is that I can spend more time with my family, like for expamle. Going to the city at night and getting ice cream! i would be super excited if we could go. Also we can go to the movie's at night and watch a cool movie while eating yummy chocolate and popcorn. I am super excited and happy!! 



Tuesday, 30 March 2021

Naomi Thank You Letter - Tuesday (T1, W9)

Thank You Letter



 Start your letter in the space below:

          Pt england school Room 8- Dear Mr Jacobson. I'm Thankful for you setting up killer zone, It was 

          super fun!! Also thank you for setting up the cycle ball. it was also super fun and interesting, even 

          though I did get into a little crash but I didn’t really mind.

     

         Your activities were really fun. Thank you for judging at the dance competition you looked like a very good judge to me! :D You were also impressed with our dance as well, even the other judges were impressed.


          

         I hope you enjoyed this year's camp and goodluck next year with the year 5 and 6.  

          

Monday, 29 March 2021

Naomi Monday - Reflective Writing - Camp (T1 W9)

 

My other writing task!!

Naomi Monday - Reflective Writing - Camp (T1 W9)

 REFLECTIVE WRITING - Year 5 & 6 Camp

You have prepared 3 slides of writing - Well done, but we’re not done yet!

It is your turn to turn them into a finished piece of writing. 

You will need to write two extra paragraphs - an Introduction to Year 5 & 6 Camp, and a Conclusion; how did you feel about camp once it was finished?


Introduction - Who, What, When, Where?

Last week the year 5 and 6 students had camp. Everyone at camp was in 6 different camp groups. There was Tui, Ruru, Kea, Weka, Piwakawaka and Pukeko. Camp is a lot of fun, even when you get to do a lot of fun activities.

Paragraph One: Your Happy Moment

My happy moment was going to the hall for our activity because the hall is really fun. you can even Mark around in the hall with your best friends as well. Not only that, there is a small trampoline, skateboards, scooters and more to do in the hall!! That's why I got super excited when it was time for us to go there and play around. I even played volleyball with Qweenie Sienna and other girls.

Paragraph Two: Your Challenging Moment

The most activity I didn't like was kayaking because I can get really cold when the water is very cold. camp team Tui was walking to the beach because we had to do kayaking for our first activity for the day and I don't really like to kayak sometimes. I wasn’t too excited to go kayaking.

Paragraph Three: Your Proud Moment

My proud moment is that on thursday night we had a dance competition. We are super proud of ourselves because our camp team won. We worked super duper hard to win that dance competition last week on thursday!! We tried hard and did our best to win 1st place. Sad that it's my last year to go to camp. I hope next year my brother's camp team will win!!

Conclusion: How did you feel after all of that?

I felt super exhausted, even my feet hurt from dancing on thursday and running around at camp. I was happy to be home because i could play with my friends online and go on my Ipad and play Roblox all day long. I am sometimes lazy but i like to do stuff with my mum as well when i get bored, or if i want to go out. 

Camp was super duper fun. even though my feet kinda hurt from running around and stuff.

Thursday, 11 March 2021

Writing: Rugby game on Sunday.

Me and my brother is lucky because we got chosen to go to a rugby game on Sunday! but were not the only ones going. Their will be 14 or 15 boys and girls going i think??, I'm not to sure because i forgot. Anyways, I just wanted to share this on my blog is because on Sunday is a special day. on Sunday the blues will be playing their game! and that's cool. I am super excited to go :D. Also we get an extra ticket to bring an adult. Me and my brother is bringing my mum and his dad. If you don't know what I mean by his dad, well. My uncle and mum is sharing  my brother because he really wanted a son! the reason why he wanted a son is because he had 3 daughters and he wanted a son so badly. The rugby game is going to be a great game on Sunday!

Thursday, 4 March 2021

Naomi Thursday: Writing

 Europe

WALT: use descriptive and powerful language.


Today we are looking at the European countries. Europe has such a rich history, and their countries are so beautiful. Some countries even have buildings, statues and landmarks that have lasted well over hundreds of years.


Your job is to choose a photo, and then use your senses and imagination to write a story about you and your family visiting there.


Planning


Which country am I doing?

→

Who

What

When

Where






Bronze: 2 paragraphs

Silver: 3 paragraphs

Gold: 4+ paragraphs


________________________________________________________________________________

Start your writing here:


→We finally landed in Paris which was in France!. Me and my family were so excited. We grabbed our stuff and left the plane. 2 minutes later we came out of the Airport and waited for the taxi to come. 10 minutes later the taxi finally arrived. Me, my sister and brother gave our suitcase to our mum to put it in the boot, then went into the car and waited for our mum to finish.



My mum finally finished and we buckled up, ready to go to our hotel. An hour later we arrived, phew that was a long drive. We got out and grabbed our suitcases. We said bye to the taxi driver and went inside the hotel. We were in paris so some people didn’ know english. Luckily The women at the entrance area or whatever knew english!. She was half french, full english. 


My mum signed us in and we have been given a key. We went into the elevator and clicked the level; 2 floor.  After we looked for our room, I found it. we put the key in, then My mum opened the door and our hotel room was huge!. 2 beds and more. 


We packed our stuff away and went to go have lunch. A few hours later it was night time. We brushed our teeth and got changed into our pjs. We were going to go visit the eiffel tower tomorrow!, I was so excited to go, I always wanted to visit the Eiffel tower. The next day we got up and got ready for our trip to the eiffel tower!. After we had our breakfast, we waited outside for our taxi to arrive!. Phew minutes later the taxi came and we hopped in the car. We all buckled up and took off.



Couple of minutes later we finally made it!. I jumped out and started running around. 


Monday, 1 March 2021

Naomi Monday: Maui and the Sun Writing

 Maui and the Sun


Using describing words, rewrite Maui and the Sun. Make sure you use adjectives to make your writing more interesting!


Topic

Audience

Purpose

Rewriting Maui and the Sun

People who read our blogs

Writing it in our own words and using adjectives to make it more interesting


Bronze: 2 paragraphs

Silver: 3 paragraphs

Gold: 4+ paragraphs


Planning


What happened? What different adjectives might you be able to use here?

In the beginning?


In the middle?


At the end?



______________________________________________________________________________


Start your writing here

→ A very long time ago when Aotearoa was young. There were 3 brothers. One of them was very clever, his name was Maui. Maui wanted to catch the sun to tell him to slow down because they didn’t have enough time to do their stuff like catching fishes and More!. 


Maui brothers laughed and said, you can’t catch the sun because he's so powerful, his even so hot you can burn. Maui said, I will use this jaw bone to slow the sun down. 

The very next day, Maui told his brother to collect as much harakeke to make a rope to catch the sun. 


After they finished, they Travelled to the East side because that's where the sun first rises. After a long walk they find a deep pit. They looked down and they saw the sun sleeping. So they hid behind trees and went into caves. The next morning They were waiting outside the deep pit for the sun to rise. A couple of minutes later the sun finally came up and they Caught The sun. The sun was super angry that he started to roar and throw fire everywhere.



The brothers and other people tried to hold the sun as long as they could. Maui took out the jaw bone and said. You need to move slowly because we always never have time to do our stuff!, said Maui. If we release you, you will move slowly and give us more daylight said Maui. 

The sun knew he was defeated, so he said yes and Maui, The brothers and others released him. 


The sun finally started to move slowly. Maui and his brothers, plus others were happy because they could now do more stuff!. 



Monday, 22 February 2021

Naomi My time in the water recount

 Start below


> When me and my mum got to the beach, we grabbed our stuff out of the car and walked over to the sand area. We got to the sand, we got out our beach mat and made it flat. After we finished, we started to put on sunblock. When I finished putting on the sunblock, I ran into the water. It was kinda cold at first but i got used to it. 


I started to get cold. So I got out of the water and grabbed my towel. After I grabbed my towel I grabbed a Packet of chips and started to eat. I loved to swim at the beach so much so we need to keep our ocean safe. After i finished eating, I layed down for a bit so I could get dry. 


It was 5pm in the afternoon. So me and my mum packed up ready to go. 


keep our ocean safe!.