Showing posts with label 2020 / Room 10/ writing /Year 5 /. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 2020 / Room 10/ writing /Year 5 /. Show all posts
Wednesday, 3 June 2020
Friday, 29 May 2020
Thursday, 28 May 2020
Wednesday, 27 May 2020
Tom Riddle at Hogwarts
Tom Riddle at Hogwarts
- Option One: You are going back in time and are Tom Riddle before he became Voldemort. It is his first day at Hogwarts you are going to write about his experience.
You can begin the journey from getting off the train or you might like to start it with receiving your letter in the mail.
- Option Two:You have just received your letter in the mail and have been selected to attend Hogwarts. Write about your own experience arriving at Hogwarts.
Watch the video about Harry arriving at Hogwarts for the first time to give you some ideas.
Length
Bronze medal = 2 paragraphs
Silver medal = 3 paragraphs
Gold medal = 5 paragraphs
Write a creative story using the plan below: You can use this plan or create your own!
Orientation
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Problem
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Resolution
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Further ideas:
- i feel excited.
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Further ideas:
- happy but scared to be separated with my friends.
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Further ideas:
- gryffindor
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Start Writing below
When I went to my mailbox I saw a letter inside it. I grabbed the letter out and went back inside my house. After I got the letter from the mailbox I turned it around and It said hogwarts. When I looked at the letter I opened the letter and I pulled out the note inside.
I opened it up and looked at it Then I started to read it. It took a while to read it but I didn't mind. After i finished reading it, I was excited.. I was going to a wizard and witch school. I was so excited to go to hogwarts. When I stopped reading it I was excited. So then I went to my mum and showed her the note.
I showed my mum the note she grabbed then started to read it. After she was reading it she looked up at me and She was so excited and said. okay you need to get ready. It says you're going next week monday. I said that I already knew that so I started to pack my bags. :Next week monday:
When i woke up it was so bright and sunny. I looked at the date and it said monday 5th may. It was time to go to hogwarts. I was so excited to go. So I got up, cleaned my room and got ready. When I finished getting ready my mum drove me to the train station and then she gave me the note to the train.
After I got out of the car I looked at the note and it said. Platform 9 and 3 quarters. When I looked at it I stopped looking at the note and walked around the train station. I was really confused where it was because it was my first time at a train station.
When I looked at my lift I heard a woman say follow me kids to platform 9 and 3 quarters. I saw them with the same things So then I followed. they also have the same pet but different colours. After I followed them I saw platform 9 and 3 quarters. But? Where was the train. I looked around then?. I saw the woman and those kids staring at a wall.
I was wondering if there was a secret door behind it. So then I looked at them and then. An older boy went through the wall. I looked at him then he went through a wall. I was shocked. I didn’t expect that to happen.
I didn’t know what to do so then I went to the woman and there was a girl standing next to her. I think it was her kids. I asked her hi my name is Naomi. I’m going on a train to hogwarts and i don’t know where to go.
When i asked her a question she said. Oh well hello Naomi said the woman. She shocked my hand and then she said. this is my daughter. Her name is rose. Rose donald. Rose said hello i’m rose. And i said hello i’m Naomi.
Tuesday, 26 May 2020
Megatron's Hunt
MEGATRON’S HUNT
Instructions
- Describe the images that come to mind;
Name the feelings and thoughts triggered by the imagery and sounds in the music;
Mimic the pacing and rhythm through word choice, sentence structure and line breaks;
Or build on a theme or message.
- The plan is just a guide.
Write a setting description to the photo and theme music.
Introduction:
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What can you see?
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I can see Megatron at Pt England school in the picture.
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What can you hear?
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I can hear creepy spooky music.
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What can you smell?
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I can smell air.
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What can be felt?
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I can feel the cold floor, A table and a chair.
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Describe the atmosphere and mood?
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Start Writing below
Megatron is a bad person. He is very big and really mean.
He wants to destroy optimus prime and the whole team. He can do whatever.
He is a bad person, a meanie and he is not kind. He is jealous of optimus prime and the team.
They can work together like a real team.
Friday, 22 May 2020
Wednesday, 20 May 2020
Tuesday, 19 May 2020
Monday, 18 May 2020
Thursday, 14 May 2020
Wednesday, 13 May 2020
Thursday, 7 May 2020
t's a good country to explore.
south america is a great place to explore because they have nice places Disney Land and other cool places to explore.
Wednesday, 6 May 2020
Tuesday, 5 May 2020
Friday, 1 May 2020
Volcano Acrostic Poems
HI! my name is Naomi and for our second writing task is Volcano Acrostic Poems. i really enjoyed doing it because i like writing a lot and i love to read my story's. i hope we can do more of these next time....
Thursday, 30 April 2020
Baking Soda and Vinegar Experiment
Baking Soda and Vinegar Experiment
- Malt vinegar
- Baking soda
- 100mls of hot water.
Method:
- Put 2 1/2-tsp of baking soda into a tall glass
- In another glass pour 150mls of vinegar
- Put the 100mls of hot water in the glass that has the baking soda.
- Make sure you have a big clear area to do this in. Pour the vinegar into the glass of hot water and baking soda. Watch the experiment explode.
Write 2-3 sentences about how this experiment is similar to an erupting volcano:
The soda and hot water act like Magma sitting at the bottom of the volcano. When you pour the vinegar into the glass, the vinegar starts to act like tectonic plates (Tectonic plates rubs against each other) the gases from the soda then separates when the vinegar touches which then erupts like a volcano…….
Saturday, 25 April 2020
Thursday, 26 March 2020
making miss west her dinner for the day!.
HI my name is Naomi. Today I am going to cook miss west her dinner for today. Let's get
started. First I am going to make the chips then the chicken and
bacon with a nice drink on the side. After that i am going to make the cake. So first I put in
the flour. Next sugar milk and eggs and then I mix.
started. First I am going to make the chips then the chicken and
bacon with a nice drink on the side. After that i am going to make the cake. So first I put in
the flour. Next sugar milk and eggs and then I mix.
After mixing I put the cake in the oven and wait for a few minutes. After that few minutes
I open the oven and check if it's ready. After checking if it's ready I pulled it out and
started to put the icing on the cake.Then next i put candy on the top of the cake then done.
I open the oven and check if it's ready. After checking if it's ready I pulled it out and
started to put the icing on the cake.Then next i put candy on the top of the cake then done.
Finally the last part is the drinks. For the drinks it is pink Smoothy blue Smoothy and other
more. I am finally finished with Miss west dinner. I hope she likes it!.
more. I am finally finished with Miss west dinner. I hope she likes it!.
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