One day Mr. Jackson. Was going on a helicopter to see the city. Mr. Jackson got on
the helicopter and they closed the doors
then took off. After an hour flying to the city they finally made it. Mr. Jackson
was so Surprised to see the city.
the helicopter and they closed the doors
then took off. After an hour flying to the city they finally made it. Mr. Jackson
was so Surprised to see the city.
But then something went wrong. They ran out of gas so the
helicopter was going down really fast.When Mr. Jackson opened the window to get air.
He could smell smoke. He was scared.When the helicopter was going down he could see
grass in front of his eyes he knew he was going to land on hard impact so he put his
hands on the back of the chair, put his head down and was ready.
3 2 1 boom!. After that
hard crash people came to try and help but they didn't see anyone because there was
smoke blowing around the helicopter.
helicopter was going down really fast.When Mr. Jackson opened the window to get air.
He could smell smoke. He was scared.When the helicopter was going down he could see
grass in front of his eyes he knew he was going to land on hard impact so he put his
hands on the back of the chair, put his head down and was ready.
3 2 1 boom!. After that
hard crash people came to try and help but they didn't see anyone because there was
smoke blowing around the helicopter.
But then they saw someone crawling out. It was Mr. Jackson. Mr. Jackson was so
lucky to still be alive.
So people ran and pulled him out.
He got a bad cuts on his arms, legs and face also he had burses. 2 weeks later he came out
of the hospital and was happy to go back home to his family. His last words were.
I never ever! am going back on helicopters! Again. But maybe he will never know?
lucky to still be alive.
So people ran and pulled him out.
He got a bad cuts on his arms, legs and face also he had burses. 2 weeks later he came out
of the hospital and was happy to go back home to his family. His last words were.
I never ever! am going back on helicopters! Again. But maybe he will never know?
Crash.
This is a very creative piece of writing, Naomi! Awesome work! I really like all the interesting words you have used. Remember to read through and check you have put full stops in the correct place.
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